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Untitled
Contributed by
brokensmile
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:13:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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the skies look kinda grey
and the clouds pass me by
I lay on the cold ground
and drift away into the sky
my mind is somewhere else
away from this horrible place
away from all my problems
but still tears running down this face
somethings ill never know
and now its just to late
to even attempt to understand
why im filled with so much hate
the clouds start moving faster
as I lay im slowly fading
fading away from here
this is no longer complicating
as my crying continues
I cant hold back these tears
everything is silent
as I slowly start to disappear
as I stare at the sky
so refreshing is the air
taking my last breath
because this life didnt seem fair
Copyright ©
brokensmile
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2004-06-23 10:13:39]
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Re: Untitled
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by MizzSarah on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:43:51 PM AEST
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I love this poem! It's awesome. I really enjoyed writing it.
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Re: Untitled
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by MizzSarah on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:44:09 PM AEST
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