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Chin Up.
Contributed by
winged
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:19:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Keeping your chin up,
Sometimes hurts
But it's better than letting the worst
Shine through the world.
Keep it real, Keep it strong
Even if it doesn't belong
Be true, because
Inside is where it matters
Truth and love
Only matter when
The heart on the inside is warm.
Idle hugs,
Needless cries
It's better to keep the chin up
When the darkness takes a hold.
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winged
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2004-06-23 08:19:05]
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Re: Chin Up.
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:58:07 AM AEST
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As I was reading your poem for whatever reason I thought of Charlottes Web and the line where she says to Wilbur--"Chin up Wilbur". She was a very wise spider.
I loved your poem and thought you did a fine job composing it.
A great reminder to keep our chins up. :) |
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Re: Chin Up.
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:37:58 PM AEST
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| great write, the first part would make an excellent stanza in a song. |
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