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Lover's Dance
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:22:17 AM in AEST
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Two souls partaking in a chance
They find each other in a dance
Under moonlight beams and the fires glow
Showing love; movement of bodies slow.
He steps forward and she follows lead
They sway together in the moment of need
Under glittered stars and night
Sharing hope; love, life and light.
Tender circles through the park
Dancing their way from light to dark
In this sweet lovers embrace
Happiness is in reach; no longer to chase.
And through the clouds of golden seams
On all the gleaming starlight beams
Nurturing all the softened skin
A lover's dance; where both hearts win.
Copyright ©
strange_lindsey
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2004-06-23 05:22:17]
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Re: Lover's Dance
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:23:22 AM AEST
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| That was truly stunning....very very beautiful play of words and imagery...whoever this is dedicated to must be really happy people. |
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Re: Lover's Dance
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:59:51 AM AEST
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A wonderful dedication.
They (whomever they are) should feel proud to have such notable poems written about them.
Many thanks for writing, Lindsey, well done! |
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Re: Lover's Dance
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:06:42 AM AEST
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What a beautiful write, the moment is very well portrayed making it almost impossible for the reader not to visualise, lovely job. Enjoyable read.
Corinna |
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Re: Lover's Dance
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:29:50 AM AEST
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awwwww this was so lovely. who ever they are will be very pleased when they read this :)
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Lover's Dance
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:26:59 AM AEST
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| This is so beautiful... :) |
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Re: Lover's Dance
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:46:57 AM AEST
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*is awestruck* Wow . . . Lindsey . . . this is beautiful.
. . . what am I saying? It's a lot more than beautiful; it's touching, romantic, near flawless, sweet . . . I love every inch of it :).
And, especially in light of recent events, you show what a good person you really are by writing this ^^. *hugs Lindsey*
--Nora |
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Re: Lover's Dance
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:18:08 PM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Lover's Dance
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 12:25:39 AM AEST
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This is exceedingly gorgeous, and words cannot do it justice...tears, perhaps, but nothing so simple as words or accolades. All I can say is thank you, from the depths of my soul. I absolutely love it.
Truly,
-Dan |
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Re: Lover's Dance
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by brigitte7735 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:06:14 PM AEST
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So elegant...
Happiness is in reach; no longer to chase.
That sums up everything , for everybody im sure. Its an exhausting process but so worth it..
Lots of Love
Vanessa ( 090404 ) |
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