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SaFe- iN a LiTTLe BoX
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:08:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She kept the sound, sound of his voice
Safe- in a little box-
And took it out; once a day-
Just to hear him say her name.
She kept the pound, pounding of his heart
Safe- in a little box-
And took it out; once a day-
Just to feel him live on through her.
She kept his strong, handsome hands
Safe- in a little box-
And took them out; once a day-
Just to help them learn her face.
She kept his brown, brownish-green eyes
Safe- in a little box-
And took them out; once a day-
Just to stare right through them.
I kept his broken, breaking body
Safe- in a box-
And kept it six feet underground
I took it out; all the time
Just the show the world he's mine.
I've kept the haunting, crazy secret
Safe- in a box-
And it stayed with him in the ground
I took it out; not even once
Just to lay forever next to him.
I put him there
Safe- in a box-
Six feet underground
I layed there breathing in his air
Forever together; soil surrounds.
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Re: SaFe- iN a LiTTLe BoX
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by gery_giggles on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:11:35 AM AEST
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nice poem!....its a dark,sick kinda love. i liked it lol...i can see pictures as i'm reading.
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Re: SaFe- iN a LiTTLe BoX
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:31:39 AM AEST
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this was great.....kee em coming
pixie xx |
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Re: SaFe- iN a LiTTLe BoX
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by hooray_its_jen on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:46:16 AM AEST
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I put my comment to Lindsey
Safe in a box
And I sent it to her
And this is what it said:
Lindsey, you did a wonderful job and I enjoyed this, although the ending gave me the chills....maybe I should put those in a box too? I'm just kidding. Hehe. Very nice write!
Blessings
Love, Jenna |
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Re: SaFe- iN a LiTTLe BoX
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by Cancer on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:32:07 PM AEST
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i loved it. i was thinking, "i like it. the idea is great." and then...
"I kept his broken, breaking body
Safe- in a box-
And kept it six feet underground
I took it out; all the time
Just the show the world he's mine."
and of course, that hooked me. f*cking beautiful. this would make a hell of a song.
guess i'm done. skittletacular scrawl.
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