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Peace
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:46:01 AM in AEST
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Carmine-coated promises, heating up the night
Burning, arching clear over prussian tints of light
Watching in silence as we choke on our synthetic compassion
And I try to tell myself I'm dreaming
but I'm dreaming through a mire of glasshouses
What little life can I gain impaled by shards of such pathos?
And I try to tell myself I'm dreaming
but I'm dreaming through a deadbeat space
And I try to...
I try so hard to tell myself...
Will someone stop these questions that deny me peace?
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Re: Peace
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:52:51 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking and said well.
huggs,
emy
When I'm confused I ask God. |
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Re: Peace
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:57:10 AM AEST
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Aah..........it is very hard to stop questions..
fantastic imagery.. excellent expressions..
".synthetic compassion"
"shards of such pathos"
"a mire of glasshouses
"a deadbeat space......."
I like your amazingly beautiful poem..venkat
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Re: Peace
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:59:18 AM AEST
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You truly have a wonderful way with words.
I too have longed for peace on more than one occasions especially since I share a room with my little sister...Arrgghh...
Great write. |
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Re: Peace
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 08:17:58 AM AEST
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Sometimes when you're pondering on something and try to find the answer in yourself, you keep finding new paths in the depths of your soul... How hard it is to find what you're looking for...the answers to the questions you only know and possess....
Good, intense poem!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: Peace
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:47:23 AM AEST
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| Very nicely done. You have a way of weaving words into your poem so intricately. I love it. |
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Re: Peace
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:56:12 AM AEST
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Wow, that made me think.
I love your poems. lol.
Such great images here.
And i love the question at the end. I think it ends it perfectly. Great write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Peace
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 05:39:57 AM AEST
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| Ok now im really jealous.. |
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Re: Peace
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by OMEGA_ on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:15:51 AM AEST
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what a great way in expressin your feelings
everytime i read one your poems i feel like i wanna read it again and again |
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