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WHY DO WE?
Contributed by
emystar
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:41:35 AM in AEST
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...One...
...Together...
SultryRose's Signatures
We abuse ourselves, so true
When push luv away from u.
why can't we jus face fear
as one instead of lonely tears?
Why do we hide-a-way
When luv's simple, they say?
Why do we run from luv
When we should stay?
Why can't we go on
in-luv singing our song?
every line, write, is true
want only pure luv 4-u.
It's our souls interlocked.
throw away yesturdays cloak.
There is no fear in-luv
with help from God a bove.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-06-23 01:41:35]
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Re: WHY DO WE?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 03:03:01 AM AEST
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wow emy!
This poem rings so true...
Wonderfully powerful poem filled with truth and meaning...
magnificently splendid!
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Re: WHY DO WE?
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by spooky on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:24:14 AM AEST
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| sometimes it's the rejection of luv we fear,well written,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: WHY DO WE?
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:44:31 AM AEST
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Great message in your words Emmy
Loved your poem Brill
Love Sweetangelukxxxxxx |
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Re: WHY DO WE?
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:47:11 AM AEST
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Forgot to add emmy Superb pic my kinda stuff
Just wouldent have a clue how to put one on a poem. Adds to the poem
Love sweetangelukxxxxxxx |
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Re: WHY DO WE?
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:54:29 AM AEST
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Why is the question, isn't it?
Very true words you have written here Emy.
I enjoyed this one. :) |
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Re: WHY DO WE?
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:54:29 PM AEST
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i dont know why we push love away, im guilty of that now too, arg, wonderful poem emy girl:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: WHY DO WE?
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 12:49:40 AM AEST
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NOW THAT REALLY MAKES YOU THINK! I LIKED IT ALOT!! WAY TO GO EMY!!!
LOL~DAN!!!! |
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Re: WHY DO WE?
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 01:36:46 AM AEST
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We humans have so many questions yet so little answers dont we?
Why, why indeed?
Thought provoking write, good job. |
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Re: WHY DO WE?
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by venkat on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 04:33:05 AM AEST
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Dear Emy..I have already read this once but could not comment after reading this line
"There is no fear in-luv
with help from God a bove"
any way, now I agree God's grace is also essential for the success of love in life.....
welldone..its a lovely read. venkat
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Re: WHY DO WE?
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by bernard on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 05:47:03 AM AEST
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There is no fear in-luv
with help from God a bove.
Too true with his help we really can move mountains love is higher than any mountain. I have been priveledged to know and have love for the last 48 years.
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Re: WHY DO WE?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 05:12:26 AM AEST
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there is no fear in love... got me thinking of the beatles all you need is love da da da da da! (that was a very poor rendition of the brassy trumpey bit) seriously you have captured in your poem entirely what we all need more of.
Love the image very spiritual.
wildejohnny. |
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