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Just Imagine
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:44:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Just imagine...
Before the rains came... pouring down...
A wasteland... called life...
A place where... pain weighs heavily uopn the mind...
Plunging you steadily down...
Into the depths... of a raging river called Hell...
A fearful trip... to the end... it will be...
Having found... that suddenly..
Your imagination is left to run wild and free
Just imagine...
Before the rains came... pouring down...
How time has crept... with an incredible slowness... not making a sound...
Upon an unsuspecting heart and mind...
To grind life to an almost living stand still...
But suddenly...
Through the yonder stillness... there awaits...
A blessed footprint upon the soul...
A living stain... of the blessed one...
Just imagine...
Before the rains came... pouring down...
That the sunlight breaks through... the darkness all around...
To shine into yonder windowpane...
Somehow... illuminating the darkness in your life...
As your imagination is left to run wild and free
Just imagine...
Before the rains came... pouring down...
A world... without suffering and pain...
A world... without fear and shame...
A world... without all the things that drain...
Us of our energy... in our lives...
When your imagination is left to run wild and free
Just imagine...
Before the rains came... pouring down...
A heart... that was lost... then found...
A heart... that has been trampled upon... upon the ground
A heart... that was once full of love and life
Now cut to ribbons by your cold... steel knife...
Just imagine...
Before the rains came... pouring down...
Lost... on heart... full of love and life...
Now found... full of pain and strife...
It's all... around me... day after day...
It's all... I see in every face of every place
It's there to remind me... of how this old world has gone astray
As the people let... their imaginations run wild and free
Their minds... easily shaped... easily impressed...
But sometimes... the mind needs to shake loose from the fantasy...
And be shocked back to the reality...
Just imagine...
Before the rains came... pouring down...
A world... without the imagination running wild and free...
Oh... that world... would be Heaven to me...
Just imagine...
Before the rains came... pouring down...
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Re: Just Imagine
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:35:49 AM AEST
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the rains sound cleansing to me.....not sure if this is what they are meant top be...
but it was a very interesting write - i liked the style of the poem - very different |
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Re: Just Imagine
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:42:41 AM AEST
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Very creative writing that makes one think.
Good wwork.
luv, huggs,
yo momma,
emy |
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