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best class of my life
Contributed by
deadbloodyrose
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:37:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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you stand at the front of the room yapping away
i am gettin so irate with you and your bull*****
you think you are the most important person
i think your the worlds biggest *****
in my bag is my most prized possession
unzip my bookbag and pull it out quickly
stuff it away in my big oversized pant pocket
walk up to your desk careful that you dont see
pull the gun out and keep it out of your sight
slowly and carefully i shoot out your right knee
blood pours out and creates a river beneath you
you collapse on the ground and fall forward
slowly you raise your head and look into my eyes
my face is blank but inside im jumping with glee
ive wanted so long to see you in so much pain
the students gasp and are terribly frightened
i look back over at your tears falling to the ground
tears pour out into the flowing river of your blood
i raise the gun and instantly pull the trigger
the bullet pierces throgh the skin of your left arm
now both of your sides are consumed in pain
you reach up to clench your arm with your hand
i aim at your hand shoot out your knuckles
your hand falls to the ground instantly
knees slide out from underneath and you lie flat
i take my gun and shoot our legs repeatdly
your screams are deafening and your crys so loud
the shooting stops so you can have a painful death
i utter out my final words "i love you guys"
in under a minute i shot you down and put you in pain
next its my time to leave this deadly planet
i point the gun at the side of my head
with tears in my eyes i pull the trigger
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Re: best class of my life
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:38:28 AM AEST
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oh my god!
i'm upset after reading this..... |
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Re: best class of my life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 03:07:37 AM AEST
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*eyes boggle*
gosh, I have no idea what to say...
You just scared the living daylights outta me I tell you...
That was one disturbing poem y'know?
Nevertheless, i liked it.
Very powerful and somehwat riveting,
leaving a message imprinted clearly in the reader's mind..
Very vivid too..
Great work!
Katie |
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Re: best class of my life
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by TheLastStringCut on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:10:04 AM AEST
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| HAHAHAHAH! There're a few people I'd like to do that to (MIKE!). But, ummm... don't kill yerself please, I'd be lost without you hun. I looove you sooo much. I liked this poem though, it made me giggle, then get suddenly really sad at the end... good job. toodles. |
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Re: best class of my life
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by Vermillion on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:24:23 AM AEST
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that was an outstanding poem truely vivid and awe inspiring.as i read it,it played like a movie right before my eyes.like i could see the madness.
when i was in elementary school i too dreamed of brutally murdering a classmate or two and that exact scenario played out a few time.but enough of me,you are an excellent writer and a true poet.please keep up the good work
~vermillion~ |
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Re: best class of my life
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by starryskyez09 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:31:47 AM AEST
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| WOW. that was really disturbing. but i've wanted to do that to someone b4 but kept everything to mylself *preps* other than that, i think it was really good, but dont really try to kill yourself k? |
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