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Over The Fall

Contributed by SuperAsh16 on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:52:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



why do people
treat me like they do?
its only a matter of time,
before i fall off the edge.
i cant hold on anymore,
im losing my grip.
further and further i slip,
each and every day.
for once, you're right.
i dont need this.
ive been in denial,
for so many years.
and its hard to move on,
when i have so much
to hold on to.
no one can save me,
if i dont want to be saved.
maybe thats the case.
you never know for sure.
until you're pushed over that fall.
until you cant handle it anymore.
and until that time comes,
will i ever know if you can help?




Copyright © SuperAsh16 ... [ 2004-06-22 22:52:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Over The Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:23:44 PM AEST
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nice write. =] you spelled it out well.


Re: Over The Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by imaginary on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:27:33 PM AEST
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I think you can make it by yourself. Good poem, i know i have a few things i have to let go of too. I hope you keep writign adn i'll look forward to reading your peoms in teh future!


Re: Over The Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Strawberry on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 12:54:44 PM AEST
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I liked the rythem of it. it was very well written. keep up the great work.




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