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Because of you
Contributed by
Sordida
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:28:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Once upon a time the way every classic story starts,
but this is no classic story but it comes straight from the heart. The very first time I met you and I looked into your eyes. They were as perfect as the rest of you and that made me realize. That I was all the opposite, no beauty down within. I was a bad creation just some twisted mass of skin. I wanted to be perfect I wanted you to see all the beauty that existed but even hid from me. Everytime I saw you I ran away in shame, because of all the horror in which I took all the blame. One day I just gave up my quest I simply ceased to care I walked away in silence when I saw you standing there. You called out into the darkness but I didn't turn to look, for it was you who stole my heart at first you dirty thieving crook. But now I take it back from you and walk out of the room. Later on I died that night and it was all because of you.
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Sordida
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2004-06-22 22:28:17]
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Re: Because of you
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:38:21 PM AEST
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MMM... good write... alot of emotions in there...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Because of you
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by ceci on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:49:54 PM AEST
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Nice poem, you should read one of mine : First Time. Is kinda similar to yours. Nice writing
Love,
Cecilia |
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