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All I Have Is Time
Contributed by
wikedladi
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:25:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Someday- You'll remember why you loved me.
Tommorrow- You'll remeber how you hurt me.
Yesterday- You knew you loved me.
Forever- Is how long you said you'd love me.
Never- Were you ever suppose to leave me.
Where- Are you now? You left without me.
When- Will you come back? Don't you want me?
Here- I sit alone, it's just me.....
Copyright ©
wikedladi
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2004-06-22 22:25:23]
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Re: All I Have Is Time
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by rockerfairy on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:28:38 PM AEST
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VERY strong poem,it brings out meaing-and I think it is very importnt
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Re: All I Have Is Time
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:30:45 PM AEST
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| i have a hard time trusting people, so if i was ever in your situation i would never have believed that. yet it still stings even when i believed he was lying or just saying words. remember actions speak louder than words. |
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Re: All I Have Is Time
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by Chimo on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:32:13 PM AEST
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| I like it a lot. Very intersing poem. |
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Re: All I Have Is Time
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:36:43 PM AEST
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| clever write |
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Re: All I Have Is Time
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by MDodgen on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:24:54 AM AEST
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beautiful write. i understand just how you feel, like they don't want us. but you will find someone who loves you unconditionly. good job for a first poem. 5 stars.
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Re: All I Have Is Time
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:07:53 PM AEST
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so very much said in this poem, its wonderfully stated and the message is clear, i look forward to more of your poetry, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: All I Have Is Time
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:07:56 PM AEST
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| again I seem to relate with the emotions your trying to convey here. promises are easy to make and easier to break..... but not everyone has bad intentions. another strong poem. I think some poeple are just to blind to see how much they truly have/had.... A++++ |
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