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Then you were Dead
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:18:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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"I LOVE YOU"
As you layed in the hospital bed
Thats what you said
Then you were dead.
"I LOVE YOU"
Was the last thing you said
The last thing you said
Then you were dead.
"I LOVE YOU"
As I softly stroked your head
Those are the words I finally said
Then you were dead.
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Re: Then you were Dead
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by lb12 on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:21:51 PM AEST
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this really got me thinking, in a weird way i've never really thought like before. thanx for this.
nice job. very original and unique poem... in a good way, just to tell u. |
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Re: Then you were Dead
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:19:18 PM AEST
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Very sad but I give u a five star as it reaches deep inside and definently makes one think.
So sorry for your loss.
luv, hugs,
emy
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Re: Then you were Dead
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by BrandySwanson on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:41:23 PM AEST
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yea it does make a person think. great write thanks for sharing this fine poem.sorry for your loss hope you are ok.
Brandy |
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Re: Then you were Dead
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:52:46 AM AEST
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i dont know what to say...... wow, this was so powerful
pixie xx |
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Re: Then you were Dead
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by Luinil on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:59:04 AM AEST
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| very powerful and emotional... beautifully sad.. so sorry for your loss* |
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Re: Then you were Dead
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:44:48 PM AEST
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very sad..... sorry for your pain, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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