|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
The Story of Death
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:07:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
Death is the begining
Death is the end
Death is me
You wanna tell a friend?
Death is a riddle
Death is a cure
Death is a medicine
Do you really want to know more?
Death is a game
Death is a way out
Death is a chance
Will you carry it out?
Death is here
Death is now
Death will come
Will you take the bow?
Death is my friend
Death is my love
Death is the almighty
Is it from above?
Do you understand me?
Do you even care?
Death does
I see it in its glare
Death is everything that we see
Death, is it a part of me?
Death is the worlds strife
Death is my hate
Could it be that death is life,
Or am I too late?
Copyright ©
Living_In_My_Dream
... [
2004-06-22 22:07:24] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Story of Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:12:13 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Death be not proud, though some have called thee mighty and dreadful...
Nice job. |
|
|
Re: The Story of Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by lb12 on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:16:49 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
yes, dea th is life but in my opinion life is more dea th. i dunno if that makes sense, but that's what i think.
nice poem, though. ur a good writer.
:) |
|
|
Re: The Story of Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:54:10 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow this is deep, great write
pixie xx |
|
|
Re: The Story of Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:59:21 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
yea this is really deep
i loved this...made me think of the times i wanted to commit suicide
Summer |
|
|
Re: The Story of Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:07:42 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
as always an intriguing write. you have a gift with your words, it would be such a shame to lose you... inspiring words, makes me think... A++++ |
|
|
|