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Talking With You
Contributed by
RhythmBndt
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 09:32:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I sit here crying after just talking with you
I feel like such ***** after talking with you
Why can 't you just tell me straight out
You don't love me anymore
You don't ever want me back
You want to forget all about me
I love you with all of my heart
And this is the treatment I get
Next time you tell me you love me
Think about it first
Don't say something you don't mean
And make up your mind whether you want me or not
Talking to you is like talking to a spiked wall
A spiked wall being drawn towards me but your pushing me away
I know when I'm not wanted anymore
You don't even have to say it
Your actions say it all even if they show in words more than anything else
I love you & I always will...
But I'll stop if you want me to...
Copyright ©
RhythmBndt
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2004-06-22 21:32:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Talking With You
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:58:49 AM AEST (User
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wow this is so sad.......don't stop loving ....
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Talking With You
(User Rating: 1 ) by SnowB on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:25:29 AM AEST (User
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This is such and emotion-filled poem...feeling the sadness and frustration.....wonderfully composed
Lena |
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