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Only a Hominid
Contributed by
Bones
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 09:24:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The night resembles my endless dreams
I guess I miss you more than it seems
I guess I hate being stuck in this machine
Everything is no longer completed
You were always over the competed
You never liked to be seated
you always had to be in the game
Not once did you bring me shame
Not once did we take the blame
I am only a hominid
I haven't lost my mind
How could I be so blind
to never ask why
why do we have to die
I'll never again give a sigh
I think I'll lose my sanity
Inside of my own insanity
I'm looking for serenity
I'm only a hominid
But I still have my mind
I'm no longer blind
Copyright ©
Bones
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2004-06-22 21:24:24]
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Re: Only a Hominid
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:13:03 PM AEST
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Just a bit over-rhymed, but then I am only human, LOL. Nice write.
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Re: Only a Hominid
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by BrandySwanson on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:00:46 AM AEST
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great write well done
Brandy
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Re: Only a Hominid
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:46:06 AM AEST
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I find it heartening that you managed to get this published. It's well below the standard I would have expected of a publisher's requisites.
Keep writing. And comment more - don't ask for comments if you're not prepared to comment yourself. |
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