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Under my Fridge
Contributed by
LER
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:39:47 PM in AEST
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ChildrensPoetry
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Under my Fridge
Under my fridge are odd things,
Rubber balls and diamond rings,
Seven marbles, green and blue,
Candy that turned into goo.
Seven dollars, thirty cents,
Matchbox cars with tiny dents,
Popcorn kernels, army men,
Broken pieces from a pen.
Moldy bits of cheese and ham,
Ants on top of mounds of jam,
Noodles and thirteen dead bugs,
Broken bits of coffee mugs.
One used toothpick, plastic jets,
Sting from my dad's fishing nets,
Balls of dust that make me sneeze,
Could you get the vacuum please?
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LER
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Re: Under my Fridge
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by linagalMBfan01 on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:58:46 PM AEST
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Awwwe.....That is a cute poem. Nice job.
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Re: Under my Fridge
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:24:59 PM AEST
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This is an absolutely delightful poem. I probably have lots and lots of dust bunnies and many many kibbles from my cat and several cat toys, lol. Welcome to YPDC. I will be watching for more of your work.
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Re: Under my Fridge
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:09:21 AM AEST
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ok, I thought this was cute - but yuck - I have to go clean under mine at the thought...
Nice work. |
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Re: Under my Fridge
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by thumper on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:11:31 AM AEST
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I loved this. I flowed so well my brain picked up speed as I read it!! lol Sounds like you were looking under my fridge. Great write!!
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