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recipie of life
Contributed by
deadbloodyrose
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:01:43 PM in AEST
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life is one big batch of cookies
you mess up one ingredient and the whole batch is ruined
everyone wants the main ingredient to be happiness
yet somehow some people dont recieve the correct recipie
and the very needed tablespoons of happines are forgotten
sometimes they substitute it with depression
the cookies turn out awful and just get thrown away
there is no point in saving a useless batch
they leave a disgusting taste in everyones mouths
i guess this is the recipie of my life
im just a messed up batch of cookies
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Re: recipie of life
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:20:48 PM AEST
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interesting point of view -
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Re: recipie of life
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by TheLastStringCut on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:13:05 AM AEST
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| wow! Now I want some cookie, though I ain't eatin' outta YOUR batch, ew. No, I'm kiddin' hun. I liked this one! It was sad, but made me hungry! nice. Love ya, toodles! |
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