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Loaded Temper
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:05:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Blood flowing through my veins
Anger rushing out of my mouth
Why can’t I just be calm once again?
A loaded temper
Ready to fire
Shoot at my very own mother
A close friend of mine
Let my skin do the talking
Try to figure out what’s going on now!
No one ever figured me out
I let my thoughts pour out
I expressed them with nothing but truth!
I can’t do that anymore!
No one understood how I felt!
They all thought everything was my fault!
I know I need to control my temper
Keep my mouth shut
Speak in my head not with my tongue!
People wouldn’t listen anymore
They didn’t try to help
All they did was criticize
I stopped expressing myself with words from my tongue
And started expressing myself with my blood
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Re: Loaded Temper
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:19:58 PM AEST
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yet another very powerful write very very very good keep it up keep it coming...
much love,
dani |
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Re: Loaded Temper
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:09:16 PM AEST
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| wow. that's how i feel. metaphorically at least...awesome emotion! |
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Re: Loaded Temper
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:06:54 AM AEST
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I hear you loud on this one, I too hve a temper and I have written a poem about it, great write
pixie xx |
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Re: Loaded Temper
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by TwEeK on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:52:05 PM AEST
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whoa! nicely writtin poem..i know that people can make you feel that it always is your fault.....i liked the last line tho...keep it up
tweeky |
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Re: Loaded Temper
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by frejya on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:43:44 AM AEST
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hmm nice one
poems always r a way to take out ur emotions
all my poems r my real feelings
keep writing
me |
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Re: Loaded Temper
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:52:32 PM AEST
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yeah, i know this feeling very muych so too.
but, you have expressed your feelings in this poem... and try to keep it up!
i know how you feel about how hard it can be though!
i know this is about letting your feelings go through verbal and physical violence, but do you cut also? it's just the last line made this sound like you do?
i used to cut.
if you do then don't start!
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Re: Loaded Temper
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:54:00 PM AEST
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yeah, i know this feeling very much so too.
but, you have expressed your feelings in this poem... and try to keep it up!
i know how you feel about how hard it can be though!
i know this is about letting your feelings go through verbal and physical violence, but do you cut also? it's just the last line made this sound like you do?
i used to cut.
if you don't then don't start! and good for you!
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