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Ended
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:01:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Quivering breath in a darkened corner
Shivering, clutching bloody knees
Screaming for aid, weeping relentlessly
Dreaming now indistinguishable from waking
Mocking comfort of mother to child
Rocking slowly on trembling legs
Stench of death, foul in the air
Clenched teeth, throbbing pain
Beaten into doomed surrender
Sweeten thoughts of final release
Approaching rival, blade raised high
Encroaching in life’s flowing rhythm
Eyes constricted, longest wait
Cries restricted, lifeless silence.
Copyright ©
Luinil
... [
2004-06-22 19:01:49]
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Re: Ended
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:13:44 PM AEST
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wow, very powerful I liked it a lot...keep it up and keep it coming....thanks for the comments...;)...
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Re: Ended
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:08:57 AM AEST
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wow.. great poem
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