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Angel with the Scabbed Arms
Contributed by
Colleen
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:41:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Take a look at the knife
What do you see?
This isn't a dream, it's your life
Do you see someone you don't want to be?
Can't you see
You're my beautiful angel, so delicate
Sent from Heaven, just for me
I just don't know what to make of it
You feel ugly on the outside
So you take the knife and cut deep
The ugliness drains from the inside
It's red river flows as you sit and weep
I don't understand
You're so perfect and beautiful
I wish you'd show me what's wrong, lead me by the hand
What made you so remorseful?
When you see your reflection in the blade
You see someone unfit and ugly
When you see those scars on your arms, only you know why they're made
You just don't see that you are so lovely
Copyright ©
Colleen
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2004-06-22 18:41:48]
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Re: Angel with the Scabbed Arms
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:56:23 PM AEST
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I can relate to this quite a bit you captured the feeling quite well I though. Beautiful poem.
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Re: Angel with the Scabbed Arms
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:56:33 PM AEST
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aw ye si to have written about "My Angel" cutting is a thing we myst all despise but only in some eyes does it seem right...I havent sut in a while and Im trying hard to not do it...but its hard I must say well I like dthis write it flowed well....keep it up keep it coming...
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think...
keep your head held high thats how its mean to be...
much love,
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Re: Angel with the Scabbed Arms
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:23:40 PM AEST
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I also know how it feels and am also trying not to cut anymore....i started cutting on my ankles......no one knows about it anymore...they think i stopped...this was really good.
please comment on my work too
Summer |
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Re: Angel with the Scabbed Arms
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:28:06 PM AEST
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| Colleen, thank you for writing this for us, it was beautiful. However, it seems your title was a spin off of Marilyn Manson's song title, "Angel with the Scabbed Wings." Other than that, I liked this. I think the rest of the family should read it. |
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Re: Angel with the Scabbed Arms
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:26:33 AM AEST
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wow, this was amazingly written, great piece of writing
pixie xx |
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Re: Angel with the Scabbed Arms
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by hisbeautifulnightmare on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 04:45:22 PM AEST
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| this poem almost made me cry. wow. you captured emotion extremely well in this poem. *speechless* |
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Re: Angel with the Scabbed Arms
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by darkfairy1188 on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:00:22 PM AEST
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awww! Colleen, ur my angel too! thank u. u did a beautiful job. u know we all luv u much!
*SMOOCHES!* (i stole that from Katie, i know... )
~Sara D.S. |
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