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Still the day goes on
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:24:43 PM in AEST
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Still the day goes on
And still my heart beats on
Believe me when I say
That I need to hear you today
Hold your breath
I'll breath for both of us
Think of me
In your darkest hour
Think of me
When you're all alone
Your fan blades spin
But you can't feel the air
You turn on the lights
But there's nobody there
I say all the wrong things
At all the right times
I have my doubts
But I always change my mind
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2004-06-22 18:24:43]
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Re: Still the day goes on
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:32:38 PM AEST
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wow that was a very sad write lots of feelings and emotions I loved it however keep your head held high its meant to be that way dont hang it low...dont bring yourself down...keep it up keep it coming...great write!!!
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Re: Still the day goes on
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by xthe_lonely_onex on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:42:36 PM AEST
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I must say, that is a teriffic poem. It shows just the right amount of feeling without overdoing it and I could fully relate to what you were saying. Please, keep writing. Your poetry is unique and fantastic...
-Sara |
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