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Defeated
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:08:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Spine choked with bitter frost
Blurred vision in burning eyes
Regard familiar stone face
Moon glow no longer stroking path
Defeated sigh; weary, silent weeping
Strive no more to escape from shadow
Dominated by dreamless sleep, lost and forgotten
Copyright ©
Luinil
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2004-06-22 18:08:37]
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Re: Defeated
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:13:03 PM AEST
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I really liked this short yet it said a lot...it had a lot of feeling and emotions in it...I liked it keep it up keep it coming
read and comment my stuff if you want id love to hear what you think
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Re: Defeated
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:29:10 AM AEST
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very powerful for a short piece
pixie xx |
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Re: Defeated
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by moonlightrose on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 11:52:24 PM AEST
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It was short and to the point, with so much emotion in it. I loved it.
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