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Hollow
Contributed by
slackoffsamiam
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 05:29:04 PM in AEST
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To be superficial
And partial to the impartial
Hip to the pulse of fashion
While dead inside
When you take off your makeup
Is there a soul behind it
Or just a hollow shell of a person
When you look in the mirror
What do you see?
Are your eyes as hollow as your emotions
Is your face as fake as your friendships
Is your beauty as temporary as the clothes
You wear
Or do you believe that this fairy tale ends with a
Happily Ever After...
Copyright ©
slackoffsamiam
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2004-06-22 17:29:04]
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Re: Hollow
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 05:41:39 PM AEST
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I like this poem,because I too hate the hollow shell people ALLOW you to see!
Well done!
angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Hollow
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by Seans_Girl on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 05:55:17 PM AEST
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Great poem! I couldn't agree with you more. I hate fake people so much. I hate how people are nice to people to their face and mean behind their back. I mean get some damn balls and stop being such a pussy and tell them really what you think of them. That's what i do. Maybe that's why I don't have many friends. haha. jk I'd rather have two real friends that care about you and stand up for you than a million of the b*tches that talk sh*t about you behind your back. Peace out! :)
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Re: Hollow
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by arden on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:21:46 PM AEST
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wow i agree with everything you said. i hate people like this. their emotions and depth are as deep as a kiddie pool.
anyway, this was awesome. i loved it. well done. nicely written.
Arden |
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Re: Hollow
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:30:35 AM AEST
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good poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Hollow
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:19:27 PM AEST
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This is great!
I'm so sick of all these fakes out there! How come no one can be themselves...why must everyone be the same...?? I don't get it...to fit in with a even more fakes...how stupid people are...great poem bro
please comment on my work too
summer |
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