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Blade
Contributed by
iluvpencils
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 05:18:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Blade flashes sun
Invisible to me
That blade sits
Staring back at me
Cut now
A little bit deeper
My grasp
A little bit stronger
Take the horror away
Replace the grief with pain
Blood rise
A little bit higher
My fingers a little
Bit colder
Take the horror away
Replace the grief with pain
Inviting demons to come
Live beneath my skin
Underneath these scars
Underneath this blood
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iluvpencils
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2004-06-22 17:18:28]
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Re: Blade
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:07:37 PM AEST
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wow, very powerful lots of your feelings and emotions flowing right through it...nice way of talking about it...keep it up keep it coming....
much love,
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Re: Blade
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by JacquelineAnn on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:13:59 PM AEST
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| I love your peom...I cut myself every once in a while and I know its bad, but in a way it is sort of addicting I guess...I really wish I could stop but I just have so much anger, but keep writing..I love your peoms... |
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Re: Blade
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 05:04:44 PM AEST
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good poem there I used to cut and am still trying to beat the addiction. I liked your analogy towards the demons... its exactly how i see it as well. Keep up the writing!
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