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Farewell, I Cry
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:53:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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It seems the world’s beauty is beginning to disappear
Falling away with every desperate tear
And it seems you, and they, and I, turn a blind eye
Choking back the tears we’ve yearned so long to cry
I see so much in you, in them, in me
I know there’s more, longing to be set free
Don’t hold yourself back, we can’t afford to withdraw
Be bold, be brave, don’t draw the short straw
And with every ‘hello’ comes a ‘goodbye’
And so this is thus, my farewell, I cry
I may be gone weeks, months or years
But keep fighting your wars and facing your fears
I will miss you my friends, but it must be so
It has come my time, from your-poetry I must go
Many of you will never have heard my name
But this home I will miss, all the same
And remember, when the world seems to get darker and colder
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder
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Re: Farewell, I Cry
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:00:49 PM AEST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! I really liked this piece you musnt go you need to stick around Im sure all of use would hate if you went...you need to stick around and stay with the YPDC family I liked this write a lot...but you have to stick aorund so I can enjoy some more of your work....please....lol well keep your head held high I have made my plea...
much love,
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Re: Farewell, I Cry
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:16:29 PM AEST
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My dear Charlotte!!!!! Where have you been?
I have been on the mend, and wish to speak to you again! Please don't leave this site! You are an awesome poetess, of all that you write!
Be brave, be strong, and fight the fight...lie safely in your angels arms tonight!
Angel always...godspeed my dearest friend,Joni |
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Re: Farewell, I Cry
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:31:29 PM AEST
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Charlotte! You're leaving?
Oh, no . . . you're a wonderful writer and I know I won't be the only one who will miss your beautiful poetry. I hope whatever is wrong in your life soon mends, and please come back as soon as you possibly can; we'll be waiting eagerly for your return.
--Nora |
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Re: Farewell, I Cry
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:36:19 AM AEST
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Char!!!!! Don't go!!!!! This was such a beautiful poem and we will miss your thoughts on this site. I hope like me you will only be gone a month (or shorter) and then come back suffering from severe withdrawal. Once again I loved your poem, but liked the 2nd stanza best.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Farewell, I Cry
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:47:15 PM AEST
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oh dear charlotte, what happened, i hope all is well, sweetie, my heart is with you, im with joel though; hoping you get ypdc withdrawels real soon!! be well, hope to see you on msn soon, big hugs n' big love nessa xxx...
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Re: Farewell, I Cry
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 02:10:03 AM AEST
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Darn, I got here too late!!!!!
Charlotte, please reconsider, we all love your poetry. I think you are an awesome writer and it will be a total waste if you leave. Please dont go when you have so much talent more to show. But if you decide to leave, which is very much saddening, I think you left us with an amazing write. An unforgettable poem that will certainly be cherished.
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