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There Was A Time
Contributed by
wolfwynd
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:55:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There was a time,
When love meant everything,
When forever meant forever,
And promises made, were kept.
There was a time,
When arguments rarely happened,
When tomorrow never came,
And every second seemed like a lifetime.
There was a time,
When everything in my life was you,
My life, my heart my soul,
But I've learnt that you weren't for me.
There was a time,
But love isn't something to be taken lightly,
Promises aren't there to be broken,
And forevers just another word.
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wolfwynd
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2004-06-22 14:55:58]
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Re: There Was A Time
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:03:52 PM AEST
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This was really sad I liked the flow hoewever and enjoyed the write....
But love isn't something to be taken lightly,
Promises aren't there to be broken,
And forevers just another word.
I liked that part the bestit had a lot of truth keep it up keep it coming....
read and comment my stuff if you want id love to hear what you think
much love,
Dani |
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Re: There Was A Time
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:53:56 PM AEST
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| I think people have a different meaning for "forever". I understand completely what your saying here.another good write. always lots of emotions in your works. A++++ |
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