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If...
Contributed by
Knowledge
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Sunday, 20th October 2002 @ 08:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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If ony I could have that one moment with her. If I could... it would be the most precious moment in my life. I would give almost anything for that moment.
When I see her I feel a fire inside me rekindle itself. When she is gone, the fire dies and disappears. I know it's still there because I can barely feel the embers burning my insides, waiting... waiting... Sometimes it's pleasing, sometimes painful.
If only I could have that one moment with her.
If she was being picked on, I would be there for her. I would starnge them really slowly and beat them stomach with my knee as I bring them down. Or, I would grab a baseball bat and severely beat them in the face. And possibly pull a 1440 spin kick on them. I would do whatever it takes to earn their respect, and so she has their respect also. I would defend her with my life.
If only I could have that one moment, I would let all the stress, all the tension, all the nervousness flee. I would let my emotions and all those thousands of unspeakable words explain themselves in a singel kiss.
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Re: If...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 20th October 2002 @ 09:12:07 AM AEST
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This really shows how committed you were to her... I'd hate to have been one to disrespect her.. :>)
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Re: If...
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by Emmie74 on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 09:30:14 AM AEST
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| Umm....Interesting words you chose there...Lol... Good write. I hope things worked out with you and this girl. |
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Re: If...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 01:14:45 PM AEST
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| it's okay first was better |
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Re: If...
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by crucifixioncross on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 08:23:15 AM AEST
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wtf this stupid thing didnt post it suddenly well anyways did you just start writing again or left out alot of your folder?? anyways my only question is who is this one about? i wont tell anyone yo so ya
truly yours,
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