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A Collection of Shorts
Contributed by
TheLastStringCut
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:27:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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'Curse'
A Curse
Whistles Through
Unsettling Images
Imbrue
Death Construed
A Wicked Dream
An Unreal Thing
A Curse...
'Bored'
Six Hours Passed
Here I Lay
Late Night Sucks
I Wait For Day
Five Days Passed
Here I Lay
Day Time Sucks
For Night I stay
'Juice'
A Knife Slips Across Silky White
Red Soaks Through, Draining Life
Lifejuice Falls Onto The Floor
What Do I Go On Living For?
The Click Of A Chamber Echoes Loud
A Barrel Stands At The Head Aiming Proud
A Loud Bang And Metal Makes a Hole
What Did I Go On Living For?
'Sanity'
They tell me that I've gone insane
That There's a problem with my brain
I had not clue that it would rain
Maybe I didn't hear the pain
I thought at once I ran away
Maybe it was but a dream
I saw it when I fell asleep
Maybe that wasn't really me
Maybe it was my Sanity
'Cookies and Cream'
Cookies are good
So is icecream
What ever happened to Youscream?
It seems that I'm not making sense
Somebody should put up a fence
Around my heart would be for the best
It seems that I need some rest
Rhyming is only for fools
Why should I try to be cool?
I'd gladly be the fool
As long as I got cookies and icecream
(Maybe some gummis too)
'Broken and Bloody'
This is the final page
The last step
I crept to the edge of the building
Then I lept
Through the air I flew
When I changed my mind
Wings I wished I could grow
I couldn't find
I fill with regret
As I sail to the ground
I fill with cement
Eighty feet down
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TheLastStringCut
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2004-06-22 03:27:35]
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Re: A Collection of Shorts
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:48:40 AM AEST
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very unique all of them cookies and cream very funny...yet the others are sad...sad happy not a good mix...lol but its just a collection of writes right? lol anyways I liked juice amd broek and bloody the best great writes....
keep it up keep it coming
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think...
much love,
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Re: A Collection of Shorts
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 05:39:49 AM AEST
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Very interesting boredom.
A bit sad, a bit funny and all very creative.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: A Collection of Shorts
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by poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:22:59 AM AEST
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alot going on with you....
i liked BORED,SANITY,COOKIES AND CREAM AND BROKEN AND BLOODY... VERY GOOD WRITES. like to see more work with them......... sandy |
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Re: A Collection of Shorts
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by deadbloodyrose on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:48:29 PM AEST
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| i like the descriptions in your poems jeff.. i really like the way that juice is written but it makes me sad that you were feeling that *****ty that you wrote that.. *hugs u* ill try to remember to bring mini gummy bears next time i see you... BUT IM NOT BRINGIN U ICE CREAM *shudders* unless its melted hehe.. i love you jeff.. AMI JO |
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Re: A Collection of Shorts
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by Vermillion on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 03:01:45 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed your rhyming talents and each poem was creative and well written.keep up the good work
~vermillion~ |
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