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The Lonely Star
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:03:06 AM in AEST
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One star still shines
Through endless night
It's all alone
Yet still it fight
It shines for me
It shines for you
It gives us hope
And pulls us through
When you're alone
No friends in sight
Within your heart
You'll find a light
So let it shine
Through endless night
It'll give you strength
And hope and might
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Re: The Lonely Star
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:07:00 AM AEST
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this is a great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: The Lonely Star
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:49:57 AM AEST
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| very nice * |
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Re: The Lonely Star
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 03:19:53 PM AEST
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oh! beautiful poem, david:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Lonely Star
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:54:10 PM AEST
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as your adopted sister, David, I will be truthful:
nice, but kind of cutesy and cliche'-ish but not bad
Happy one year anniversary of us being brother and sister! (I was reading my journal and tomorrow will be one year sicne we became friends. awww!)
Em |
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Re: The Lonely Star
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by eatfresh22 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:14:06 PM AEST
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Ahhh...that was pretty, David. I like the whole light from within thing. Very inspiring.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: The Lonely Star
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 05:25:26 PM AEST
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Simple, yet inspiring all the same. I wonder if I've seen that star before...
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: The Lonely Star
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 07:33:35 PM AEST
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ha! It would be a lonely star in smoggy ol' southern California... there's only about five after all.
*gloats in the fact that Oregon is very starry*
Anyway, take care. Write some more - you're getting rusty.
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Re: The Lonely Star
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by anitajames on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:41:54 PM AEST
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Kind of reminds you that the only place you can find true happiness is within yourself. Great message here David.
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