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I want so much
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:17:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Why won't you tell me what's wrong?
I want to sit with you on the moon
And watch the earth come up
Please tell me what's bothering you
I want to breathe on the back of your neck until morning comes
Why won't you talk to me?
I want to sing you a song
Being with you is what I wake up for
It's the reason I breathe
You're the reason I smile
You're the reason eat
You keep me going when I am told to stop
You keep my hopes up for a better day
I want to bring you the sun
And put it in your eyes
So you will never see darkness again
I want you to talk to me
And tell me what you're thinking
I want to know what worries you
I want to take your pain away
I want to wipe your tears away
I want you to feel the same way
My world revolves around your every move
I want to see through you
Say you're mine forever
Tell me when I'm hurting you
Tell me what to do
Forget the past
Forget the future
But think of me now
I'd trade a year of sadness
For a second with you
I want you to show that you love me
Because I already do
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Re: I want so much
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:36:00 AM AEST
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Well done. This piece speaks honestly and forthrightly.
I hope the love is returned.
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Re: I want so much
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:45:35 AM AEST
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wow very powerful I really enjoyed this very beautiful sad kind of...keep your head held high...
much love,
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Re: I want so much
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:11:13 AM AEST
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awwww this is lovely,
pixie xx |
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Re: I want so much
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:51:27 AM AEST
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