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Contributed by ChinaRivera on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:16:40 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

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Why do you secretly hurt me all the time? Smile in my face, and pretend to be kind! You sucker me, because im light hearted.
i guess thats why our spirits departed. Always planning a

verbal attack! i turn to the side, and get stabbed in the back! Your words are as sharp as a blade, cutting me deep when my debts are paid! You rip me to peices, tear up my insides! A

resistent force that always collide*s! Now, i wonder where love resides, because the love between us has left and died!
Please, don*t look me straight in my eye*s! Caress my face, and

tell me lie*s! That is something i truly despise! Deceit is written in your eye*s! Don*t take me down with your demise! You cause me so much pain inside,
and i end up wandering why! i

really thought this love would last, but now, i guess my happiness has past! i thought we were a match for sure, but now, i don*t want your love no more! you think everythings o k, So it seems!

Broken hearted, shattered dream*s! I*m so fed up with your schemes! Thats it! i had it with you! We were one love! One soul! You broke us in two! Sorry baby! But we*re through! You just don*t
know what love*s about! invite me in! then cast me out! You manifested a great loss of mine!
Thanks for wasting a life time!
Love is suppose to endure forever! it was special though,

us together, bright sunny days, perfect weather; You lured in, the rain and thunder! Where did you go? i wonder! you said, *i was your life, your reason for living!* you*re not the same as

you were back then! i guess some wicked thought crept in. No need to dwell in this place we*re in!
I*m tired of fighting over and over again! Time after time you were forgiven, but you had to go back to Original Sin.

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By China Rivera
bigcatslair@hotmail.com
freestylepoetess@lycos.com

Copyright Â© ChinaRivera ... [ 2004-06-22 01:16:40]
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Re: X×X×X× ORIGINAL SIN ×X×X×X (User Rating: 1 )
by DeathByLove on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:21:30 PM AEST
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Wow what a beautiful piece I really like it see I am faced with this type of crap ALL the time!! We shall weep together!!

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