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Again
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:41:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Wrapping end around to beginning
I will try - again
Dreams pushing up against themselves
I seem now more familiar to myself
Walking along in my own footprints
I find peace - again
Words that were uttered years before
Bounce inside my mind once more
Circling back to where I came from
I am home - again
I gathered up strength along the way
I can reconcile your memory today
I tumble through time’s open door
I am falling - again
I remember what the future is for
Again… I offer my heart to yours
Copyright ©
Silent-No-More
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2004-06-21 23:41:36]
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Re: Again
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:06:18 AM AEST
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Heavenly beautifull like the sun.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Again
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:42:07 AM AEST
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Somewhat simple, but elegant and moving. Perfect. Thanks for sharing.
I hope all goes well for you.
Andrew
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Re: Again
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:20:11 AM AEST
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good read,
pixie xx |
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Re: Again
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by SnowB on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:30:48 AM AEST
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Beautifully composed...wonderful.
Lena |
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Re: Again
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:47:44 PM AEST
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Wow, this is amazing . . . it begins well and ends equally well, keeping the reader's attention all the way through. I loved the repetition of "again".
Anyhow, this one's seriously good. Now I'm going to go do what I should've done long before, and take a little journey into the depths of your poetry . . .
--Nora |
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Re: Again
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:26:03 AM AEST
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sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Again
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 07:49:54 PM AEST
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| OMG!!! Your gift of metaphor is simply brilliant. Your poems certainly are inspirational. Seriously, Snemma, I am very impressed. |
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