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Wish Not To Care
Contributed by
xXxFaygoFetishxXx
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:21:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Wish not to care
I don't want to cry
I hate feeling the only way out is to die
But it is impossible to lie
To my feelings inside
Pretending not to care
That I do not dare
And I cannot help but cry
When you make me want to die
You've hurt me through and through
Torn my broken heart anew
Made me happier than a newly wed
Then in the same day
Nothing more than dead
I cannot help but wonder
Why your doing this to me
Why you've done the things you've done
And why it feels like your killing me
No matter what you do
I know I'll care about you
And as much as I've cried
I still want you deep down inside
And as often as I've felt suicide
I just imagine you by my side
And someday that may be true
Didn't you say to me once
Patience is a virtue
Copyright ©
xXxFaygoFetishxXx
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2004-06-21 23:21:10]
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Re: Wish Not To Care
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by xtreme_emotions on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 12:34:24 AM AEST
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| Great poem...I feel honored to be the first to both read and comment to this. I've been there before (that seems to be the line I keep saying in my comments, but it's really true)...it sucks when the person ends up gone for good, but sometimes it's for the best, especially if they treat you like dirt half the time. Anyway, like I said, great poem...I hope to hear more from you! |
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Re: Wish Not To Care
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by mountainhigh on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 05:45:02 AM AEST
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Only they who done what they did, to use and move on and play, as if nothing happened at all, but then why would we believe them again, we die a little and then move on. To dream of a love without lie.
Excellent poem, thank you for sharing.
Chris |
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Re: Wish Not To Care
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by deadbloodyrose on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:03:42 PM AEST
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| ELIZABETH I LOVE YOU!!! u know you've got nick and even though *insert name here* is realy cool nick is way better... no offense to *insert name here too* im glad that youve found nick and that you guys have made it this long i really think this ones gonna last and im glad he makes you so happy and doesnt cause u pain like this guy and previous ones have.. OTHERWISE ID BEAT THE ***** OUTTA NICK.. ok so he can beat me up with one hand BUT STILL!!! i would hurt that boy.. somehow *ponders how* THERE IS A WAY!! well im just glad that you're happy... i loves ya.. AMI JO |
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