|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Gap
Contributed by
TheReturnOfx7
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:00:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
|
Saw the gap again today
Infinitely black and encompassing
Every single effort falling through
Rope used for crossing a hangman's noose
Kicking and screaming, I'm left chokeing
Strangled by memories of you.
Copyright ©
TheReturnOfx7
... [
2004-06-21 23:00:03]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Gap
(User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 12:02:25 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Good little write Jason... hope the gap closes for ya soon... :) (is this inspired by APC by any chance?)
|
|
|
Re: Gap
(User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:56:32 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Oooooh I like ACP!
What song!?
This was good, i enjoyed it x
BS x |
|
|
Re: Gap
(User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:47:54 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Short, sweet,and very deep. Speaks volumes.
I look forward to reading more of your writes. Kudos!
Thumps ; 0 ) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
