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A life you'll never know
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:57:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I have to feel my blood
I have to know my heart
I have to see the flood
That flows to keep us apart
I have to taste the salt
I have to cry the tears
I have to know it's my fault
I have face my fears
I have to feel the pain
I have to see the color
I have to hide the stain
For it must remain undercover
I have to blame myself
I have to use the blade
I know I need no help
Sooner or later the cuts will fade
I have to deal with thing in my way
I have no choice
Look at them and hear what I say
These cuts are my voice
I have to tell you to get away from me
I have to tell you to go
I have to make you see
A life you'll never know
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Living_In_My_Dream
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2004-06-21 21:57:19]
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Re: A life you'll never know
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by rugby_player on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:59:48 PM AEST
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| Great job...worthy poem of a published author....Um yeah...i think i know your life at least a little bit if not a lot though....lol......keep it up..make a butt load of money and don't forget about me....again great write |
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Re: A life you'll never know
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by EvaRee on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:04:29 PM AEST
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wow, I actually started crying while reading this. Please, please let this just be a wonderful write. I really hope that you dont feel this way..really i do....nothing is worth it...very well done....(if this is how you feel, please talk to someone....please)
~Eva~ |
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Re: A life you'll never know
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by Lessa on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:08:35 PM AEST
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| awsome words, a peom i hope is only words, if not u certinly can make someone understand u better by showing them, this really makes u feel, very nice |
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Re: A life you'll never know
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:09:33 PM AEST
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| exellent |
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Re: A life you'll never know
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:24:50 PM AEST
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| yes i am commenting on another one of your pieces! this one spoke to me more because of the way you worded it. it seems like you are not into hiding anything and are not one to seek denials ignorance, but i could be wrong. you are not afraid to live in reality and deal with it in your own way. because you know what is right for you and no one else does. just remember as the cuts fade the emotions might as well. only time can tell. |
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Re: A life you'll never know
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by Mosie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:55:55 PM AEST
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This poem was inescapably wonderful, while at the same time being so heart felt and depressing. I hope this isn't a current issue, but if it is I wish you the best of luck. Great write! Keep your stick on the ice.
*Mosie* |
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Re: A life you'll never know
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by Mosie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:56:32 PM AEST
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This poem was inescapably wonderful, while at the same time being so heart felt and depressing. I hope this isn't a current issue, but if it is I wish you the best of luck. Great write! Keep your stick on the ice.
*Mosie* |
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Re: A life you'll never know
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by lexxie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:12:38 PM AEST
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| very emotional |
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Re: A life you'll never know
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by xxbreathlessx on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:19:06 PM AEST
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| another job VERY well done |
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