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Loud from the box
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:51:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Dying, killing me
Is not a phase
But a piece of reality
Coming to cage me in my rage
As what was once
Now all washes away
Hurting, cutting me
Is now a thing
Like a piece of reality
Slowly driven me insane
All I have been
Now washes away
Staying, living here
Is just for time
All things come to dissappear
Including this line
As all was once
Now washes away
Cleaning, healing me
Is not my, For-say
That is just a reality
Slowly takin' me away
As what is now
Now is falling apart
I would of been better
But I couldn't get it past my heart
_____________
Fiction is now killing me
trying to fix, but broken me
Never made it out of the box
Like time wasn't on the clock
I was selling my soul paying rent
And it smells worse than what I meant
I know because I've been thru the rot
Stuck there under the sun so hot
Trying to win, But loosing me
I guess that's just reality
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rhei76
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2004-06-21 21:51:30]
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Re: Loud from the box
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:28:39 AM AEST
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i understamd how you feel :( you have a great way of expression
pixie xx |
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Re: Loud from the box
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:41:10 PM AEST
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| interesting style well presented. |
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