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I can't make you
Contributed by
kori31
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:32:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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giving only part of you
is such an easy thing to do
you think you're saving face
holding back but you still lose
cause the feelings you hide
and keep locked inside
they're real inside your heart
and tearing you apart
so keep your love inside
don't tell me how you feel
I can't make you say the words
even though I know they're real
Copyright ©
kori31
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2004-06-21 21:32:44]
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Re: I can't make you
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:42:52 PM AEST
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Great concept. I wish you'd done a little more with it. I kinda wanted to read more since this was quite good. Keep on composing! Encore!
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: I can't make you
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by Kirby on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:48:20 PM AEST
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| This was a great poem. I have felt the same way that you have in this poem. This was a great write and keep em coming. You get 5 stars from me. Love::::Kirby |
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Re: I can't make you
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by xtreme_emotions on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:03:30 PM AEST
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| Great poem...I've been on both sides of that situation before, and either way it's pretty painful. Kudos on the poem, and keep writing! |
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