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Always there
Contributed by
rugby_player
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:30:07 PM in AEST
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FriendshipPoetry
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If it wasn't for this site
I would not have met one of my best friends
In such a short time we grew
You've helped through some problems
problems that were life threatning
And for that i thank you
Every morning i wake up
And think how lucky i am
Lucky enough to have met you
If it wasn't for you i'd still be drinking
I'd still be smoking
And i would have given up on what you say i do best
My writing
While i still say i'm no good
You push me to do better
I thank you for this
There is no way to re-pay you
The debt is forever
Just know when i'm over seas fighting in the war
Your one i will for sure be fighting for
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2004-06-21 21:30:07]
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Re: Always there
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by betty on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:32:33 PM AEST
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great poem. And there isn't a better person to dedicate it to.
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Re: Always there
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:42:14 PM AEST
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There is no way to re-pay you
The debt is forever
Just know when i'm over seas fighting in the war
Your one i will for sure be fighting for
I loved that part...and I loved this...thank you so much for writing this for me...I really appreciate it...it did make me feel better even when the birds are making me deaf I can still read...I channeled everything out...lol you are too one of my best friends...keep up your writing and keep your good habbits up...stop being mean to people lol...and Ill miss you when your in the war...keep your head held high...
much love,
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Re: Always there
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:29:30 PM AEST
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wow that is so beautiful
Your so lucky to have such a good friend
congrats on not smoking and drinking anymore...i'm still trying to stop...great poem...indeed keep on writing!
please comment on my work too
Summer |
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Re: Always there
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:14:41 AM AEST
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Wow,
I'm way behind here.
This is a heavenly sweet write and when-n-where will u be fighting?
I'm sure u have given the ultimate compliment in this luvly masterpeice.
huggs,
emy
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