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Invisable Prison
Contributed by
Sordida
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:16:06 PM in AEST
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toughstuff
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It's a moral obligation
a choice it is no more
it gives me no more pleasure
like it did before
I do it when I need to
to continue to feel fine
and to ensure others
that it was always mine
I’ve always had the talent
hidden deep inside
but what brought it to the surface
is when my true love died
I’ll never feel that joy
that I felt in years gone past
in one slow and lonely moment
life goes by so fast
so this is just a reminder
to others and to me
that even though I’m captured
it makes me feel free
Copyright ©
Sordida
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2004-06-21 21:16:06]
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Re: Invisable Prison
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:19:23 PM AEST
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| <3 very good! i love this poem... i felt like it applied to me while i was reading it... good work |
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Re: Invisable Prison
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:23:11 PM AEST
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Excellent!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Invisable Prison
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by AlyssaMarie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:38:20 PM AEST
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wonderful, definitly felt it applying to myself as I read it, keep up the great poems.
*hugs*
Alyssa Marie |
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