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NeCrOpHiLiAc
Contributed by
creed
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:38:03 PM in AEST
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Ich kann sehen, daß Ihr dummes Lächeln tut, was Sie sich gehen voran
ich sich interessieren nicht töten
Ich lache an Ihrem Begräbnis einstellte möglicherweise Ihren
Sarg auf Feuertoast einige Eibische weg von Ihrer Sargflamme
Ich bilde Entdeckung einiger Witze ein necrophiliac gerecht
für Sie
tun Sie irgendeine voodoo Falle Ihre Seele hier gerade für
Spaß gerade für Folterung
~In English~
I can see your stupid smile
do what you will
kill yourself
go ahead
I dont care
I'll laugh at your funeral
maybe set your coffin on fire
toast some marshmallows
off your coffins flame
I'll make some jokes
find a necrophiliac
just for you
do some voodoo
trap your soul here
just for fun
just for torture
Copyright ©
creed
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2004-06-21 19:38:03]
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Re: NeCrOpHiLiAc
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by creed on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:40:07 PM AEST
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| ok, for some odd reason it didnt put german in my comment before the poem. I said that I'd have it in german first, then english. |
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Re: NeCrOpHiLiAc
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by Sordida on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:18:07 PM AEST
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| I love this Poem. I have been this angry before too. I comepletely understand this. |
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Re: NeCrOpHiLiAc
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by TaintedOptomist on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:58:33 PM AEST
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| yes this was great, as long as it wasn't about me then i'm in trouble. |
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Re: NeCrOpHiLiAc
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by creed on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:41:33 PM AEST
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| lol. no it wasnt about you. it was about kendra, i wrote it about 1 month ago. she ticked me off....obviously. |
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Re: NeCrOpHiLiAc
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:28:32 PM AEST
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yea i know how ya feel! love the last four lines! totaly agree bro!
please comment on my work too
Summer |
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Re: NeCrOpHiLiAc
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by necrophilia_lord-abortion on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 08:25:08 AM AEST
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very interesting, ur hatred is in yet some wat a humorous way, i like that...but i was hoping that u would hav a poem really mucked up like you banging the person in their coffin or somethin, because then i could completely relate...make it more dark, and evil but still with ur humor and u could go far!!! use real necrophilia, add some canablism, and make u the murderor, also some satanic stuff, hail satan...
is the first paragraph indicating that maybe the person is emo??? i hate emo's! let them all die!!! kill them all!!! rahhh!!! |
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