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Moon light Part 2
Contributed by
rugby_player
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:38:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As I kiss you softly
I begin to taste your sweet breath
We lock eyes
I feel a bolt of electricity
Flowing through my vains
Your breathing begins to change
I feel warmth from your once cold back
Could it be?
You feel it with me
I gently hold you in my arms
Again I whisper those words
You said "I heard you the first time"
I'm in disblief
You kept me waiting
Waiting all this time
Put me through the anguish
The anguish of saying it again; for the first time
But I figured out why
You wanted this moment to be just right
I couldn't see it then
But I can see it oh so clearly now
As I wipe the tears from your eyes
You mutter those sweet little words
I Love You Too
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2004-06-21 16:38:33]
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Re: Moon light Part 2
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:46:25 PM AEST
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wow, this is coming from a "published" writer lol Beutiful piece...I loved this it was so sweet and full of your feelings I fell in love with it...keep it up...its getting better and better as we speak...
keep it up keep it coming
much love,
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Re: Moon light Part 2
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by rollingon4you on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:33:16 PM AEST
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Re: Moon light Part 2
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:44:42 PM AEST
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Veery beautifull work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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