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Trying
Contributed by
Laurel126
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:30:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm just a girl
Trying to live in a crazy mixed up world
Trying hard to do my best
My friends and family, I must impress
Forgetting who I am
I always do
I loose my way in life
And I don't know what to do
My true friends are always there
They give me courage to live another day
And try even harder
And to see the image in the mirror
A little bit clearer
Copyright ©
Laurel126
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2004-06-21 15:30:06]
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Re: Trying
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by Dead_Next_Tuesday on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:46:55 PM AEST
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| Very nice. This flows well. |
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Re: Trying
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by Trisha on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:50:24 PM AEST
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| Good |
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Re: Trying
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:11:54 PM AEST
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| You've very straightforward about how you're feeling and I think that's what really made this piece speak to me. Well done. |
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