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Invisible
Contributed by
AlyssaMarie
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:17:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If I am so stupid,
Why do you have me help?
If I can’t comprehend what you’re saying,
Why even bother talking to me?
If I’m such a disappointment,
Why do you acknowledge my existence?
I try hard to do what I’m asked,
I only exist do to things for others.
If I’m not needed, I’m Invisible.
If I’m such a problem, why should I exist?
If I left, it’d only be noticed when you need something.
I do have feelings, I do know pain.
If your so ashamed, why act like you care?
You don’t care do you?
Am I a mistake, an embarrassment, what?
I must be something, besides
Invisible
Copyright ©
AlyssaMarie
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2004-06-21 15:17:43]
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Re: Invisible
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by Colleen on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:59:47 PM AEST
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| I know EXACTLY what you are going through. It sucks big time. Parents are like the main source of frusteration for everything. Talk to me if you ever feel like they aren't listening. I know that feeling all too well... |
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Re: Invisible
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by freckle on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 03:18:17 PM AEST
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What a sad poem! I am hoping that since you posted this; things have gotten better for you. I have teenage daughters and I love them silly. I truly hope you are no longer invisible.
You did well in your poem, expressing yourself. Thanks for sharing!
Carol |
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