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love it only causes pain

Contributed by deadbloodyrose on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:23:16 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

there was a tiny sliver of my heart left
you stole that from me yesterday
along with the last bit of my trust
you thief, you grabbed my last ounce of love
you snatched away my dignity as well
the little amount of happiness and joyi had, you took
what meant the most to me and what i had so little of
you took these all away in your sly ***** way
i am so numb now, so emotionless my body is raw
my insides are hollow except for a few bones and a couple muscles
thanks to you blood ran from my body last night
i broke my promise to so many beacuase of you
i hope you feel big and so ***** proud
i will never trust or love again, not even myself
you're amazing, sly, trcky and above all an *****
what you did was so ***** low
how could you steal from someone who loved you so much
my life was already falling apart but now all the pieces are shattered
now there is no hope left, no happiness to get me by
i gave up so much for you and this is how you repay
i was so depressed i couldnt even cry
you knife was the sharpest and most painful
you thrusted it into my back and twisted it around
it reached all parts of my body and left me emotionless
my whole body is numb, i feel no more
only one thing brings me happiness
thats the face that you didnt teal one other thing
something you wanted to take so bad
the one thing i still have is my virginity
everything else you've stolen from me

Copyright © deadbloodyrose ... [ 2004-06-21 14:23:16]
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Re: love it only causes pain (User Rating: 1 )
by hisbeautifulnightmare on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:02:49 PM AEST
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woah...this is amazing...it's really strong..."my whole body is numb, i feel no more" totally grabs me...woah

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