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The Rest of Society
Contributed by
HellsLibrarian
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:06:00 PM in AEST
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I distinguish myself constantly,
yet still I float in a sea of anonymity.
I am an individual- unusual and unique
-just like the rest of society.
I live by my own moral code,
hold myself to mine own standard;
I’m Not a cardboard cut-out,
just a charm-school drop-out.
I’m Not a reasonable facsimile thereof,
still I wait for love.
They say
Walk this way
Talk this way
Mock this way
But No. Not I. Not me.
Me and society
The teenage morass
lost
I, a snowflake in the blizzard.
Copyright ©
HellsLibrarian
... [
2004-06-21 14:06:00]
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Re: The Rest of Society
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:54:25 PM AEST
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This is rather good. I found your use of Aerosmith's classic lyric in no way hindered or enhanced the piece, as it fits into the overall structure anonymously, rather like your snowflake in the blizzard that is this poem.
Strongly worded and resonative.
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Re: The Rest of Society
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by thumper on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:38:00 PM AEST
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Great statement of individuality. To thine own self be true. "A snowflake in the blizzard" nice imagery. Write on H.
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Re: The Rest of Society
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 08:06:04 PM AEST
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beautiful...to be ones self is an amazing thing...to be someone else is not...it's so sad that so many are not anymore....or never have......
summer |
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Re: The Rest of Society
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by Strawberry on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 10:43:42 PM AEST
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very nice write
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keep it up |
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