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Perish
Contributed by
AngelousBlack
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:53:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A young fragile soul
With no where to go
Watches her dear love
With wings of a dove
Her soul fading away
As he sees it go astray
He cries so soundly
He wishes the world to Perish
Cause he lost his dear love
" Please give her back to me.
So that we can be free."
His voice so bad
His eyes so sad
He wishes the world to Perish
" Dear love, please don`t cry."
He looks at her so dry
" I'll always be in the heart."
Her voice so sweet like candy
Her eyes to calm like the river
She is so beautiful like a flower
She wishes nothing more
Then for him to care
" Please come back to me."
But he still wishes the world to Perish
She fades away from him
But he does not wish her to go
" Angel!" He shouts
But she is fading away
" Farewell, sweet prince.
I'll always be in your heart."
But he still wishes the world to Perish.
by Angelous Black
Copyright ©
AngelousBlack
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2004-06-21 13:53:00]
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Re: Perish
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by HellsLibrarian on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:08:21 PM AEST
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| It's a pretty sentiment, but I think the poem lost something when you forced all the lines to rhyme. |
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Re: Perish
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:15:08 PM AEST
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| i think that this is a very good poem, and i like the rhyming used. |
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Re: Perish
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:22:11 PM AEST
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beautiful poem, I honestly feel you found the emotion of someone who has lost a lover, you found mine...great job...
Tasha |
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