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Unable too please.
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:24:54 PM in AEST
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Able too keep you happy
For so it seems
Yet you yell and scream
Why at me
I do what you want
Yet not pleasing you
Always confused
Never enough
If its not a constant war between you
Its ***** talking too me
You seem too think I cant get enough
Even though I tell you thats enough
Your both my parents
Being drivin away
Always happy too leave
And sad too return
One day Ill be gone
You wont know where
Ill keep in touch with one
But the other not as much
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heartfilledblood
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2004-06-21 13:24:54]
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Re: Unable too please.
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:30:47 PM AEST
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Thie is very sad I too agree with you leaving and staying in touch with one, I say it too myself everyday thats how its gonna be but I think it may be hard to live without my parents but I may be strong and live without them...I relate to this one a lot however I enjoyed it a lot too...very powerful your feelings and emotions are flowing through it and I can totally see that...beautiful write
keep it up keep it coming
read and comment my stuff if you want id love to hear what you think...
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Re: Unable too please.
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by recklessguy on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:55:32 PM AEST
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| when you get older you will look back and smile things are hard now they work out later in life(most times that is) |
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