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Ungreatful
Contributed by
KalRai
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:51:24 PM in AEST
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You tell me I am an ungreatful witch because I won't obey your every wish.
But tell me this-was I ungreatful when I let you beat me to the core?
Splatter my blood on the walls, carpet, and door?
Let you listen to me holler and screech when you filled my eyes with bleach? Your going to listen to me now. I'm climbing back up to the top where I belong. Where you can never again do me wrong.
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KalRai
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2004-06-21 12:51:24]
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Re: Ungreatful
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:25:48 PM AEST
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I loved this....a lot you deserve to be on the top your writing is very powerful and the flow of it is very unique I liked this one a lot keep it up keep it coming
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think
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Re: Ungreatful
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by recklessguy on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:57:07 PM AEST
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I know someone else who went through this type of treatment she shines now and you will also leave the loser
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Re: Ungreatful
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by waos on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:59:59 PM AEST
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| I like the rhyme scheme of it. and you put your emotion in quite a bit too. good job. |
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