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You and Me
Contributed by
Bruce
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:43:06 PM in AEST
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The weather outside is terrible, cold and raining too
But sitting here together, I feel wonderful just being next to You
You brighten up my life, with what You do and say
You have that special something, that never goes away
When I look into your eyes, I can see deep down inside
The love we have for each other, could never be denied
How lucky we both are, this second time around
A truly great relationship, the two of us have found
You are the best my darling, and I love You with my heart
Nothing in this world, will ever keep us apart
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-06-21 12:43:06]
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Re: You and Me
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by RhythmBndt on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:44:37 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write. It made think of the one I love :) |
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Re: You and Me
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by SnowB on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:47:46 PM AEST
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So beautiful and romantic...the flow is perfect. Lovely poem.
Lena |
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Re: You and Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:27:49 PM AEST
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| nice sentiment, easy flow. |
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Re: You and Me
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:49:06 PM AEST
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The weather outside is terrible, cold and raining too
But sitting here together, I feel wonderful just being next to You
I would have to say those are my favorite lines...they speak truth I enjoyed this a lot made me also think of the one I love I guess you have a way of doing that well I loved this it was a beautiful write your feelings and emotions were showering through tit....
keep it up keep it coming
read and comment my stuff if you want id love to hear what you think
much love,
Dani
again, a great write!!! |
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Re: You and Me
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by waos on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:06:57 PM AEST
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| That's very sweet. So it's the "second time around", eh? Well I wish you both the best of luck...I hope it's way better than the first time round. :D |
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Re: You and Me
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by bebe20071 on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:50:35 PM AEST
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I readlly love made me think of the one i love!
keep it come cuz I love e'm
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Re: You and Me
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:12:02 PM AEST
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This is lovely, Bruce. I'm certain your significant other must have felt quite honored and loved when reading it (assuming you shared it - of course you should have!!!!).
Feeling quite happy for you... and... well... a bit jealous too-
SNM |
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