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long journey
Contributed by
desertwispers
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:20:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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One foot infront of the other
trudging ever onward
tripping and falling
dust off do it again
sleepless nights
too much wondering
worry eats one away
when least expected
its all right there
blooming like flowers
round your feet
never give up
the victory is near
sit down and cry
then its defeat
love, live, let be
all will soon come
then you'll know
your chosen destiny
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Re: long journey
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:40:23 PM AEST
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One foot infront of the other
trudging ever onward
tripping and falling
dust off do it again
Those lines strike me for some reason...I think a lot of people can relate to them and if they dont they should they can mae a better person out of theirselves if they keep their jhead held high I liked this write your feelings and emotions flowing right through
keep it up keep it coming...(keep your head held high)
read and comment my stuff if you want id love to hear what you think
much love,
Dani
again, a beautiful write!!! |
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Re: long journey
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by recklessguy on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:53:23 PM AEST
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nice
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